The Temple of the Phantom
Super Penguin went to the temple. The temple looked scary from the outside. It looked like a haunted house from the outside. Super Penguin went inside and found a skeleton on the floor. Blue aurora came out from his body. “I never should have gone in the temple. It shucked the life right out of me.!” Super penguin was even scared then before. He walked deeper and found a hourglass floating over a stand. Super penguin wondered what that was until the old guy ( has no name cause i didn’t bother to give him a name) came in an told super penguin what that was.” that there is the hourglass of neo-dauglus. he was the leader of the ocean and watched the town until the phantom killed him in the hourglass. Take the hourglass and it would protect you from the darkness.” Super Penguin went in the temple. Their were purple spots on the floor in the whole room. There was a guy surrounded by spikes. He was the the teams caption, Luigi. ” get me out of here!” Super penguin looked for a switch to activate the spikes. Their was a purple ball. Super penguin ran right up to it. Right then when super penguin was going to touch it a guy covered in armor came out. ” you would not touch this orb.” said the phantoms guard ” Who’s going to stop me.” The guard attacked super penguin but SP dodged it. Then he used his fists of fury and knocked him of. His armor came of and it was one of the baseball players. It was Baby Luigi! The spikes turned off and Luigi was free to go. Super Penguin went to Luigi and Luigi was happy to be free. To thank super penguin, Luigi joined team. Super penguin followed Luigi up stairs. When they went up stairs, they saw to of the phantoms guards. “Those guards most be more of your baseball players.” said super penguin. “they are?” said luigi. “yea they are.” said super penguin In order to get past them we have to distract them to pull the switch. Baby Luigi went up to the guard and the guard started to chase him. When he got close, Luigi kicked him really hard and knocked his armor off. It was baby DK. Luigi pulled the lever and the door opened. They all went to the next part of the room. Their were 3 guards blocking a lock with a eye on it.” i think we need a key for it?” said Luigi ” no duh!” said super penguin ” you don’t have to be mean” said Luigi, then they started to complain. ” Stop it now and free me from this ugly guard.” said ? ” hey watch it buddy, i can scramble your face to make it look like those scary people!” said the guard. Yea you and your stories!” said ? ” never mind!” said the guard. ” who was that?” said luigi “(sercetly) Do those two boys ever talk?” said super penguin. ” not really.” said luigi. They went further into the floor and found the three guards blocking the key. Behind them was a mokey jumping around and some stairs that said boss. They went up to the guards and the guards….ran away! ” what are they doing.” said super penguin “ I don’t…..” said luigi ” HEY, INSTED OF TALKING YOU CAN GET ME OUT OF HERE! FIND THE KEY AND GET ME OUT OF HERE!” said the monkey “STOP SCREAMING AT ME OR I’LL MESS UP YOUR FACE MISTER!” said luigi “FIRST I AM A GIRL SO SHUT YOUR MOUTH UP!” said the monkey “STOP YELLING AT ME!!!!!!!!!!” said luigi. So much wind came out of his mouth that it broke the lock. “Thank you very much for breaking the lock.” said the monkey “My name is Dixie Kong. Up the stairs theirs Droom the master of fire. He is the ruler of this temple and who beat Neo-Dauglas” said dixie “Lets beat him at get back this temple!” said super penguin. “Yea!” said everybody. They all went up the stairs. There was torches on the edges of the floor. “Welcome. you are going to be defeated!” said Droom. He summoned 3 fire bats. “Go my pets, kill them!” said droom. The first bat attacked Luigi. Luigi kicked offline and missed. The bat hit him and Luigi got hurt. “Your lucky he didn’t bite you. All you got to do is what you do in baseball. When the bat comes hit them with your bat. Throw the baby’s at Droom.” said super penguin “ok” said everybody. The second bat attacked. Dixie got her bat out and swing for the bat. The bat went flying to the wall. When he hit it he didn’t get hurt. “You can’t kill my bats. Their unstoppable.” said Droom “How do we them?” said Luigi. “With this.” said ? and that person threw the boomerang at the bat. The bat went flying at the wall;and when he hit the Wall he got destroyed and someone came out. It was a green crocodile came out “I’m finally out!” “it took me so long to get out of that armor.” said the crocodile “first of whats your name and second WE GOT YOU OUT.” said luigi. “My name is Kritter.” said Kritter. “stop talking and fight for once.” said droom “Your not hurting anyone Droom!” said ?. “Who said that!” said droom “Me!” and someone came down and kicked droom. “Ow, that hurt!” said droom “I’m the greens swordsman master of the sword.” said the GS “Then why do you use a boomerang?” said Luigi “Because i use it!” said GS. The GS threw another boomerang at the two bats and they got killed. “Were free!” said two people “I’m King K. Rool.” said KKR. “I’m King Boo.” said KB. “everyone use the force!” said Super penguin! Blue aurora came out of everyone and aimed for Droom. “Ah!” said droom and he got sent into a million pieces into the air.
November 12th, 2008 at 10:06 am
I think it was good. A huge problem i hope you dont do in the future is copyrighting stuff. Seriously, Don’t copy the charcters from video games, plz just use a real charcter you made, like maybe…. I don’t know, use your own. Anyway good full story.
7.5 out of 10
November 12th, 2008 at 10:08 am
i thought that the story was really cool! i love it when there is a continuation of the story
November 12th, 2008 at 10:13 am
This story toke a long time to make. I didn’t finish it but its still a good story. My main character is super penguin. He is cool.
January 7th, 2009 at 10:59 pm
it was a good story