The Beginning of Super Penguin…..
Super Penguin was once part of a super hero team called the D-force. He is taking a vacation from fighting villains all day. He puts on the T.V. in his hideout and a news flash pops out. “CP’s best baseball team is missing. They got taken by this giant megadroid\scorpion. They went off to the temple of the ocean king. Who will save them!” said the reporter.
Super Penguin was wondering if he should save them. Then decided that yes, he would. He went down to the temple of the ocean king and…..
October 17th, 2008 at 6:30 pm
Very good Greenluigi! Good beggining, you stayed with the idea of the monsters we made up when we were part of a team! GREAT!
October 24th, 2008 at 7:55 pm
It is a good start and a very interesting topic but you have to talk more about this D-force and you should point out the villains history. But otherwise it was great.